Do It Again
You'll remember the time
When you were young & beautiful
You had the power to melt the rocks
the urge to create the impossible
Eyes to appreciate beauty
The arms to hold your beloved
The knack of doing all mischiefs
the urge to create the impossible
Eyes to appreciate beauty
The arms to hold your beloved
The knack of doing all mischiefs
A sense of every non-sense
But time passes
and so does the age
but you're lucky
You still got that rage
To get into that world
once more before you perish
To grab the power of life
make every moment cherish
So get up before you fall
take the charge, do it all
Cause time and tide waits for none
And its life for once after all!
But time passes
and so does the age
but you're lucky
You still got that rage
To get into that world
once more before you perish
To grab the power of life
make every moment cherish
So get up before you fall
take the charge, do it all
Cause time and tide waits for none
And its life for once after all!
posted by Mridul at
January 22, 2010
2 Comments:
lovely! nice flow, ended neatly, overall a great delight.
//comment for JUST DIED overall//
..you have a very unique style of writing which perhaps u use only to convey the lows of life. I do the same but i have realized it is wrong.
the more negative u write the more negative u r trying to hold on with you....sorry to preach though.
Nothing can be captured more beautifully as sorrow but it is a challenge and u have accepted it very well.
You write beautifully, try drawing the happy canvas with words..wud love to read some.:)
Thank you for your valuable comments Suzmi. As for the canvas with a happy picture, I have captured a few (very few though), since the list is long, let me help you out and save some time.
Try the following for the non-gloomy styles:
"Virgin Mother Mary"
"One Second"
Try the following, as they are a few of my favs:
"Purple Haze"
"Erased"
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